COPY CLEANUP!

BEFORE!

Bleh. Boring. Disjointed. Uninspired.

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Let’s see what we can do…

Wow, amazing! I did this myself. Better flow, more competence, more personality. More realness.

I think it can look a bit better…

It looks so much better!

I rewrote this ad for Zapier. I made it look good and clickable.

I rewrote this Taboola ad. Pretty simple, but effective techniques that make it easier to digest.

I rewrote this Guardz ad. Now it actually looks readable and makes you WANT to click on it.

I rewrote this ad for Henry Cloud. I made it flow way better and sound more real.